Based on my peer review I think I should start checking my essay more throughly. Whats being corrected I can easily fix myself, because it’s simple things such as commas is wrong places or spelling errors. A thing I could add to my essay revise check list is to double check my narrative point of view I’ve noticed I switch from first person to second a lot often than I would like. Also I could add double checking my subject and verb agreement, because I know I don’t always pick the right verb to go with the subject.

Unfortunately I didn’t have a plan for completing essay number three early. I completed it on time but, revising was last minute and I didn’t really have time to properly execute corrections. For next time though I hope to start revising after my peer reviews are done. That way I can take everything that’s been corrected and add it in, considering corrections are right of course. I will also add in my new items on the revising check list, and properly go through it for corrections.